One thing i did add was the fifth sense. i realised that it didn't really make sense to have the four senses - Sight, Smell, Touch and Sound. And then leave out Taste. This was something brought to my attention by my tutors, so i added this into the refined version.
I also cleaned up some of the little green and pink shapes that were made from the repetition of the rain dashes. It was said that it made it look a little bit messy so i just deleted the smaller parts to clean up the whole piece of text. This looks much better now.
It was also said that i should get rid of the small text at the bottom, but i think in context it works well and even if it doesn't need to need to be there, i feel that it adds to the poster. I tried it without but i didn't like it ass much. To me, it felt as if there was something missing.
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