DandAD // Design Is About Doing // Idea Three Continued

I am beginning to become aware that my design is looking more and more 'Hipster'. Especially with Helvetica over a photograph of rain. (see Fig. 1) But i feel that in context for this brief that this would be quite a good poster to promote rain. Also, if Erik Kessels is picking a winner from these, he can't dislike them because they are directly influenced from his work. That's my secret plan. Some other variations of the type and layout...

(Fig. 1)

If the poster was cropped like this, would it work better? FEEDBACK NEEDED!