I decided to play around with the design of my hot-dog fold a little bit, seeing as i had a day or two before the booked printing slot and wanted to get it looking as good as i could before it would be too late.
Here was the finished booklet before i tweaked it...
the first thing i did was change the edition number panel on the bag. On the original, it was way too big, i needed to shrink it down on the page. Secondly, i thought that the big bold circle and lines surrounding the number 10 was unnecessary so also decided to take that way. I change the font around the circle to form a larger circle to 'limited edition ~ print number'. I think this adds a little bit of a personal touch and would make the potential customers want to buy my product more. here are the results below...
On the whole, the feedback from my mock-up i got was great. People seemed to like it even though i was unsure about the anatomy of type being a very dry subject. The only real criticism i got was that the colour scheme was a bit much, blue and pink.
I decided to experiment further into this to see if i could make it look better...
As you can see on teh poster here, i have changed to a red and slightly darker blue. I think this works much better, especially when i ass the off white background in which is only representing the stock i will be using...
I also changed the lines behind the logo, making them slightly thicker!
I am a lot more happy with the final result of this now!
As for the inside of the booklet, i kept it pretty similar. The only change i made really was the lines running through the book to red and blue and also some of the text on the back, as well as the logo on the front...
Ready To Print!
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