Proverbally Yours - Further Development

Using the same illustrations of the locks i previously created, i linked them all together, almost to look like they was all falling across the page. When i was creating this i loved the idea but looking at it again, the outlines look too messy and too much going on. I need to somehow simplify the design, or strip it completely down. To do this i tried to add this pretty gaudy gold colour (which i hate, not sure why i did it). This seemed to make more sense, adding colour, as it simplified the design, but still didn't look quite right. WORK IN PROGRESS!