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Pro's
- Stationary works really well as a consistent set
- Like the idea of bulldog clips and elastic bands.
- Earthy tones of wood and antique stock work well
- Good relationship between website and print based
- Well mocked up exterior and interior (thinking about how i can further brand the restaurant into a larger range)
Improvements
- Interior is too stark clean when linked with name 'anatomy' this can put users off. Gives a clinical medical feel like dissecting human bodies which isn't sppealing. Avoid this by keeping the branding clean whilst keeping the interiors very homely
- Experiment more with Type and Image
- Experiment more with development of colour scheme and stationary
My Comments
Overall, I was really happy with my feedback. My target audience was guessed correctly through the branding and my stationary went down really well with the group. This is good at this stage that I can still have time to improve or add to the body of work.
The only main thing i need to change is the interior of the restaraunt. I need to make it look more homely and I could also branch off into other areas within the interior that I haven't though about. I could also add further peices of stationary and also complete the website if I have time.
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